Free School Milk Re-Introduced 'Simply To Wind Up Thatcherites'.
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Re-Intriduced? Surely, typo or not, you can proof read 10 words?
Also sure that grammatically it can just be Thatcherites, instead of the Thatcherites. Brevity being the soul of wit and all, you could save 10%
Thank you for your helpful suggestion, which has made it much funnier.
I did ponder the use of the definite article. What do other readers think? Would the suggested simplification make the headline clearer or funnier? Please post your thoughts - and remember, I only have a limited time (or should that simply be 'limited time'?) before the edit window closes.
Thank you in advance.
Drop the "The".
Your wish is my command. Do I get lots of stars now please?
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