Tesco's lasagne found to contain traces of Princess Anne
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I'd like to add that I believe this would be a better joke if Princess Anne was dead, but Princess Margaret wasn't "horsy" enough for my liking.
Haha. Appeals to me.
In the spirit of being constructive and supportive to new writers I’m going to politely explain that this isn’t very good.
The horsemeat theme has been done to death and then some and has also dropped out of the news a bit lately, so isn’t even really topical. If you’re going to do something about a story that has already been the subject of around 300,000 other subs then you need to find a new angle. “Princess Anne looks a bit like a horse” doesn’t quite cut it I’m afraid. And it wouldn’t even if she was dead.
Keep trying though. Just maybe not on horsemeat. Unless you can find a fresh approach.
Maybe something involving a monkey, everybody likes monkeys.
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