NewsBiscuit : Irony as thinnest tablet leads to obesity!

Irony as thinnest tablet leads to obesity!

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Truebiscuit

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And sore thumbs.

Posted 3 months ago #
Idiot

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I reckon this torrent of subs would work better (and may be better received) if you were to leave them as just headlines. The extra bits serve only as a distraction.

Posted 3 months ago #
Truebiscuit

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What are the extra bits? It says I have to put something but then if I do you don't like it? That seems a bit 'crummy'!

Posted 3 months ago #
Lens Cap

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Or space them out. How about once a year

Posted 3 months ago #
Truebiscuit

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'Once a year'

Posted 3 months ago #
Lens Cap

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And make them funny, that will help

Posted 3 months ago #
Idiot

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As an example:

http://newsbiscuit.com/forum/topic.php?id=55090

A full stop is all that's needed. Oh, and I never said I 'didn't like it' - I'm just offering a bit of advice, for what it's worth.

Posted 3 months ago #
Lens Cap

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I didn't like it

Posted 3 months ago #
Truebiscuit

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I've edited it to make it funnier, will it get some stars now? I'd love this to get picked.

Posted 3 months ago #

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