Justin Lee Collins sentenced to 140 hours unpaid 'none-tv' work
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I did Collins!!! His pedo-bierd!!!
IS it this collins?? COs if so, your a nickin twat.
See what you mean but think 'none-tv'is clumsy. How about "140 hours don't 'come-on-tv' service "?
I wanted to put 'Justin Lee Collins sentenced to 140 hours unpaid work - 'no tv' stipulates judge' but it wouldn't fit into the standard imperial ticker format.
Ok. I thought you were punning communitee, hence my come-on-tv.
Personally I feel if you can't get it in and make it sound right thenI would leave it
How about changing 'sentenced to' to simply 'to do' and 'stipulates' to 'says'. If you mention the judge you don't need sentenced. Also, Is he not sometime refered to as JLC. If so that would help get it down.
Thanks for the input. How about this:
'Lee Collins to do 140 hours unpaid work - 'no tv' stipulates judge'
It makes more sense. Does it fit? If so I would repost.
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