Nice editing job! Works loads better than my original sub. I kind of knew where I wanted to go with it but the original didn't quite go there. So thanks for a top job!
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Posted 1 year ago #
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I completely agree with both of you. The original was fine, and the end result was fine. The picture by red was fine too. So is everyone else for that matter. Fine job working together without any of that messy stuff.
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Top idea. A headline to die for.
Posted 1 year ago #
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