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   SpankyMonkey
   

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   A lovely piece of work.

   Posted 1 year ago #
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   Ironduke
   

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   I think would have been even better if you flipped the rascism- and he started ranting about the whities all looking so different to each other, with their tiny penises, shit sprinting, very versatile hair and lack of rhythym.

   Posted 1 year ago #
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   Ironduke
   

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   Which now I read it back, reminds me of my school report...

   Posted 1 year ago #
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   f0zz
   

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   Exactly what I thought too, Ironduke. Although having not been here more than five minutes, didn't think it prudent to venture an opinion.

   Which now I read it back, reminds me of my school report.

   Posted 1 year ago #
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   Qoxiivi
   

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   Brilliant FP. And I, personally, think it works better the way it is. The idea is fantastic enough, but I think had they chosen to go down the 'racist against whites' route, despite there being plenty of material to mine, it would have been the expected course. This way it's just a fact that once you reach a certain age, you start harbouring and voicing prejudices against black people; no matter who you are or what colour.

   Really wish I'd thought of this idea.

   Posted 1 year ago #
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   Ironduke
   

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   Aha, but you're forgetting the irony of the treble reverse bluff switcheroo...they'd be expecting the double reverse, so spin it back on them.

   I bet you never won at scissor paper stones.

   Posted 1 year ago #
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   rikkor
   

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   I give the FP five burning tires.

   Posted 1 year ago #

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