or is 'Spaedophile steals kids trucks, more soon' better?
Speedophile steals kids swimming trucks, more soon
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How about: After child's swimming trunks go missing, police question known speedophile.
Sounds a bit more like a news headline and puts the pay-off at the end?
Yes, much better. Ta!
Or even simpler and removing any unpleasant connotations:
Swimming trunks theft; police question known speedophiles.
I got thrown out of our local pool as the S's had worn off my Speedo's......
(Jason Manford I think?!)
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