Great, original idea. Then wandered a bit, ended with weak punch line.
JP can take the constructive criticism.
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Rubbery FP jp..
Rik - yeah, I'm prone to wandering, as I told the judge during my breaking and entering trial. Also I assume you're referring to the edited version, and not my blisteringly hilarious original!
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