http://newsbiscuit.com/forum/topic.php?id=53836 The NewsBiscuit Community en-US Sat, 18 May 2013 17:14:56 +0000 http://bbpress.org/?v=1.0.2 q http://newsbiscuit.com/forum/search.php http://newsbiscuit.com/forum/topic.php?id=53836#post-155422 Thu, 27 Dec 2012 10:07:14 +0000 Bourbon 155422@http://newsbiscuit.com/forum/ <p>Yo yo muthafucka wit me guns, and biatches, and Brussel fucking sprouts. </p> http://newsbiscuit.com/forum/topic.php?id=53836#post-155361 Wed, 26 Dec 2012 23:38:09 +0000 danster 155361@http://newsbiscuit.com/forum/ <p>I too am fortunate enough not to have a rap tune in my head so toil to make it scan.<br /> I suspect it may not be that important wif da yoof masif of today.</p> <p>But I suspect fudging lyrics a bit to make them fit has been done before.<br /> If your music is from the 1970 then this Undertones track just creeps in as an example. Surely the bold bit is an ask in anyone's book?</p> <p>Now I've got a cousin called Kevin<br /> He's sure to go to heaven</p> <p>He's got a fur lined sheepskin jacket<br /> My ma said they cost a packet</p> <p>He's got a degree in economics<br /> Maths, physics and bionics<br /> <strong>He thinks that I'm a cabbage<br /> 'Cause I hate University Challenge<br /> </strong> </p> http://newsbiscuit.com/forum/topic.php?id=53836#post-155357 Wed, 26 Dec 2012 23:18:03 +0000 Sinnick 155357@http://newsbiscuit.com/forum/ <p>Hmm. Might be better in the other Room if you want proper feedback.</p> <p>I can't quite get a rap tune in my head - this is probably because decent music stopped in 1979, and I have a blind spot since then. That shouldn't detract from your good work, and there's a lot of good stuff in there. Mostly ending in -tion (which personally I'd have spelled -shun to emphasise the Caribbean tones). </p> http://newsbiscuit.com/forum/topic.php?id=53836#post-155338 Wed, 26 Dec 2012 20:50:46 +0000 danster 155338@http://newsbiscuit.com/forum/ <p>I attempted to scribe a Christmas Rap song, or C.Rap song as it may be better described.<br /> But having had no response from Dizzee Rascal or Slim Shady when I offered my lyrics to them for a festive season single release, thought I may as well throw it out there to see if anyone on here can finesse it into a winner. A few percent royalties is all I'll require if you make it big.</p> <p>Song title :<br /> Yo Sista, don't give me no sprouts.</p> <p>Lyrics so far :<br /> I feel mild elation that the formalisation and publication of this information,<br /> may just hold back the realisation and manifestation of a grave situation......</p> <p>Sprouts... induce a degradation and disintegration of my system of digestion,<br /> resulting in agitation triggering expansions and contractions my bowel's reaction<br /> is the precipitation and proliferation of noxious gaseous inducing colonic irritation<br /> and perpetuation of extreme production and emanation of highly noxious flatulation<br /> creating toxic radiation and the population suffering palpitation and asphyxiation,<br /> so for the preservation and conservation of our nation please refrain from serving that green vegetation.</p> <p>Word.... </p>